Day 271/272:  Website 4.0 Copy & Connected Stories UI "Tree"

Sean Everett
1 upvote by Alejandro Vizio.

Day 272:  Website 4.0 Creative Copy

Trying a friend's new collaboration writing app for this copy. Let's make changes at the following location to finish this puppy off:

Draft

Works very similarly to github, only much more user friendly for the novice.

products page:

section 1:
- option 1
- Record your voice over multiple photos.

section 2 :
- option 1
- Show multiple moments with 1 post.
- Look at the apps on your phone. They only let you share one thing at a time, making it impossible to relate one thing to another.
- That's not how the real world works. When you're standing next to your friends, you show them multiple things, describing one after the other, until you've made your point.
So why isn't there an app that lets you do just that? Now there is.
StoryApp. Share your story.

- option 2
- You have a story.  Share it with others.
- Surprise is the best thing about our day.  Apps only let you share one thing at a time, making it impossible to tell the whole tale to others.
- But that's not how real life works.  When you're with a close friend or colleague, you show them multiple things and describe them one after another until the story is done.  It's why comedians are so funny, we go see movies, or enjoy the experience of an awesome video game.
So why isn't there an app that let's you do that?  Now there is.  And it's as simple as 1, 2, 3.
StoryApp.  Share your story.

- option 3
- You have a story.  Share it in one post.
- Sounds bytes and single images are everywhere online and on our apps.  Fragmented, and unconnected to context or meaning.
That's not how real life works, and that's not how we relate to one another.  When you're with friends camping, at a party, or in the boardroom at work, you share through story.  You explain a bunch of stuff in sequence and show people things while you do it.
So why isn't there an app that let's you do that?  Now there is.  And all you need to do is keep being you.
StoryApp.  Share your story.

- option 4
- Stories are many moments.  Share it in one post.

-option 5
- All the apps on your phone right now only let you post photos and text with small snippets in time.  Its like sharing a life with someone through a tiny key hole, and never seeing who they actually are.  And frankly, we here at Adam and Luna are sick of it. Why communicate with the people you care about with fragments of sentences? or tire out your fingers typing  on tiny keyboards? Why look at piles and piles of unrelated photos, and folders,  just to get a sense of someone's day?  Wouldn't it be easier to just  be there with them for one second? one breath? one story as long or short as you like it?
 So we bring you Story App. Your voice over multiple photos.  Strung together into story chats that flow back and forth like regular conversation. Share one quick breath of a moment, or an entire epic. it's up to you. And organized, not with piles of data,  but with rising and falling stories. ordered in the way that we tell them to eachother everyday.

Welcome to Story App. Stop looking through a keyhole at life, and open the door.

section 3:
- option 1
- Share your Story in 3 easy steps.
- 1 Add photos, 2 Record voice, 3 Share story

- option 2
- Tell your tale in 3 easy steps.
- 1 Add photos, 2 Record voice, 3 Share story

section 4:
- option 1
- Stories with friends.

- option 2
- User examples.

- option 3
- Story examples.

section 5:
- option 1
- Reserve your username.


services page

section 1:
- option 1
- Building stories from your ideas.

- option 2
- Building work to amplify your ideas.

- option 3
- Building solutions from your ideas.

section 2:
- option 1
- Your brand has a story.  Tell it with our help.
- A brand is nothing more than the story of the people who believe in it.
- Mickey Mouse, nothing more than lines on paper, has lasted longer than Fortune 500 companies.
We combine classic animation techniques of Disney's 9 Old Men with modern storyboarding tools from feature length films to transform your logo, video, website or app into an epic tale.
Below is a small sample of our work.

- option 2
- You have a story.  Tell it with our help.
- A brand is nothing more than a story of the people who believe in it.
- Mickey Mouse, nothing more than lines on paper, has lasted longer than Fortune 500 companies.
We combine animation techniques with pinch of a technology, and a dash of modern storyboarding  techniques to transform your identity, video, website, or app into an epic tale.
Below is a small sample of what we do.

- option 3
- You have a story.  Tell it with our help.
- A brand is nothing more than story and those that believe in it.
- Mickey Mouse.  Henry Ford.  Ghandi.  Abraham Lincoln.  Interesting people and characters that transformed a culture and the viewpoint of billions.  What they each had was a compelling story and a way to communicate it.  Guess what?  So you do you.  We want to help share that with the world.
Below are some stories we're already telling.

section 3:
- option1
- Our work.

section 4:
- option 1
- Contact us with your idea.

- option 2
- Contact us for services.


family page

section 1:
- option 1
- Many places but one focus.

- option 2
- Many places, one focus.

- option 3
- Many places with one focus.

section 2:
- option 1
- We have a story.  To help people keep going.
- Whether through technology, art, or storytelling, we hope to show the world that our differences are what make us the same.
- That you're full of magic, and you can create the world around you, just by imagining it.
It will take time to transform that idea into something that helps other people, but it's this epic journey that creates the best story.
No one can do it by themselves. Alone we survive. Together we thrive.

- option 2
- We have a story.  Humanize technology

- option 3
- We have a story.  To help others keep going.
- Whether though technology, art, science, or storytelling, we hope to share that our differences are what make us the same.
-  The same stuff that's in our eyes was in the center of stars. 
You're full of magic, and that magic is responsible for everything that surrounds us everyday.  All it takes is a bit of imagination and a passionate family to grow with.  The first pen stroke to the functioning product is the journey that creates the best ideas and stories.
No one can do it by themselves.  Alone we survive.  Together we thrive.

- option 4
- We have a story.  To help others keep going.
- The left brain can't operate without the right.  The left foot can't propel without the right foot.  We're a family of engineers and artists.  Our goal is the same.
With a little elbow grease, active imagination, and technical knowhow, all things you see around you have been built.  We believe when a family works together and encourages one another, it's far more than we could ever achieve as individuals.  It's way more fun also!
Alone we survive.  Together we thrive.

- option 5
- We have story.  To help others keep going.
- The left brain can't operate without the right.  The left foot can't propel without the right foot.
Were a family of engineers and artists, and our goal is the same.
Keep walking and moving.

section 3:
- option 1
- Hello world.

section 4:
- option 1
- Say hello to our world.

- option 2
- Contact us to say hello.

- option 3
- Start a conversation.

- option 4
- Say hello!  We're friendly folk.


- next steps for trag today
- go through each page and finalize creative copy

- will be posting all versions and variations to this evernote this afternoon

^trag


- brainstorm for products section
- sean and nick

you can see a sequence of things that are happening to me

combining a bunch of different things
coffee shop, pet rabbits, family station wagon from childhood, cooking food with girl

it's the story of my day

all this other stuff happened
capture all the things that I didn't plan on happening

"weren't part of the script"

share the series of unexpected treasures during your day

it's like finding a dollar in your pocket


(needs to be more specific:  "iPod. 1000 songs in your pocket")

^sean


In 1927 silent movies came alive with sound. In 2013, the silent photos in your camera roll will do the same.

StoryApp. Add a bit of life back to your life.

100-Year Vision
Collect your family's entire life story so your grandchild can "talk" with your grandfather as if they're in the same room.

Use it as a new way to show off your day or your work, and charge money for access to your best story. Get discovered while discovering yourself.

^sean
Conflicting modification by jerodchirico2@gmail.com on April 19, 2013, 10:20:51 AM:
show an entire weekend in 1 post


products page:

section 1:
- option 1
- Record your voice over multiple photos.

section 2 :
- option 1
- Show multiple moments with 1 post.
- Look at the apps on your phone. They only let you share one thing at a time, making it impossible to relate one thing to another.
- That's not how the real world works. When you're standing next to your friends, you show them multiple things, describing one after the other, until you've made your point.
So why isn't there an app that lets you do just that? Now there is.
StoryApp. Share your story.

- option 2
- You have a story.  Share it with others.
- Surprise is the best thing about our day.  Apps only let you share one thing at a time, making it impossible to tell the whole tale to others.
- But that's not how real life works.  When you're with a close friend or colleague, you show them multiple things and describe them one after another until the story is done.  It's why comedians are so funny, we go see movies, or enjoy the experience of an awesome video game.
So why isn't there an app that let's you do that?  Now there is.  And it's as simple as 1, 2, 3.
StoryApp.  Share your story.

- option 3
- You have a story.  Share it in one post.
- Sounds bytes and single images are everywhere online and on our apps.  Fragmented, and unconnected to context or meaning.
That's not how real life works, and that's not how we relate to one another.  When you're with friends camping, at a party, or in the boardroom at work, you share through story.  You explain a bunch of stuff in sequence and show people things while you do it.
So why isn't there an app that let's you do that?  Now there is.  And all you need to do is keep being you.
StoryApp.  Share your story.

- option 4
- Stories are many moments.  Share it in one post.

section 3:
- option 1
- Share your Story in 3 easy steps.
- 1 Add photos, 2 Record voice, 3 Share story

- option 2
- Tell your tale in 3 easy steps.
- 1 Add photos, 2 Record voice, 3 Share story

section 4:
- option 1
- Stories with friends.

- option 2
- User examples.

- option 3
- Story examples.

section 5:
- option 1
- Reserve your username.


services page

section 1:
- option 1
- Building stories from your ideas.

- option 2
- Building work to amplify your ideas.

- option 3
- Building solutions from your ideas.

section 2:
- option 1
- Your brand has a story.  Tell it with our help.
- A brand is nothing more than the story of the people who believe in it.
- Mickey Mouse, nothing more than lines on paper, has lasted longer than Fortune 500 companies.
We combine classic animation techniques of Disney's 9 Old Men with modern storyboarding tools from feature length films to transform your logo, video, website or app into an epic tale.
Below is a small sample of our work.

- option 2
- You have a story.  Tell it with our help.
- A brand is nothing more than a story of the people who believe in it.
- Mickey Mouse, nothing more than lines on paper, has lasted longer than Fortune 500 companies.
We combine animation techniques with pinch of a technology, and a dash of modern storyboarding  techniques to transform your identity, video, website, or app into an epic tale.
Below is a small sample of what we do.

- option 3
- You have a story.  Tell it with our help.
- A brand is nothing more than story and those that believe in it.
- Mickey Mouse.  Henry Ford.  Ghandi.  Abraham Lincoln.  Interesting people and characters that transformed a culture and the viewpoint of billions.  What they each had was a compelling story and a way to communicate it.  Guess what?  So you do you.  We want to help share that with the world.
Below are some stories we're already telling.

section 3:
- option1
- Our work.

section 4:
- option 1
- Contact us with your idea.

- option 2
- Contact us for services.


family page

section 1:
- option 1
- Many places but one focus.

- option 2
- Many places, one focus.

- option 3
- Many places with one focus.

section 2:
- option 1
- We have a story.  To help people keep going.
- Whether through technology, art, or storytelling, we hope to show the world that our differences are what make us the same.
- That you're full of magic, and you can create the world around you, just by imagining it.
It will take time to transform that idea into something that helps other people, but it's this epic journey that creates the best story.
No one can do it by themselves. Alone we survive. Together we thrive.

- option 2
- We have a story.  Humanize technology

- option 3
- We have a story.  To help others keep going.
- Whether though technology, art, science, or storytelling, we hope to share that our differences are what make us the same.
-  The same stuff that's in our eyes was in the center of stars. 
You're full of magic, and that magic is responsible for everything that surrounds us everyday.  All it takes is a bit of imagination and a passionate family to grow with.  The first pen stroke to the functioning product is the journey that creates the best ideas and stories.
No one can do it by themselves.  Alone we survive.  Together we thrive.

- option 4
- We have a story.  To help others keep going.
- The left brain can't operate without the right.  The left foot can't propel without the right foot.  We're a family of engineers and artists.  Our goal is the same.
With a little elbow grease, active imagination, and technical knowhow, all things you see around you have been built.  We believe when a family works together and encourages one another, it's far more than we could ever achieve as individuals.  It's way more fun also!
Alone we survive.  Together we thrive.

- option 5
- We have story.  To help others keep going.
- The left brain can't operate without the right.  The left foot can't propel without the right foot.
Were a family of engineers and artists, and our goal is the same.
Keep walking and moving.

section 3:
- option 1
- Hello world.

section 4:
- option 1
- Say hello to our world.

- option 2
- Contact us to say hello.

- option 3
- Start a conversation.

- option 4
- Say hello!  We're friendly folk.


- next steps for trag today
- go through each page and finalize creative copy

- will be posting all versions and variations to this evernote this afternoon

^trag


- brainstorm for products section
- sean and nick

you can see a sequence of things that are happening to me

combining a bunch of different things
coffee shop, pet rabbits, family station wagon from childhood, cooking food with girl

it's the story of my day

all this other stuff happened
capture all the things that I didn't plan on happening

"weren't part of the script"

share the series of unexpected treasures during your day

it's like finding a dollar in your pocket


(needs to be more specific:  "iPod. 1000 songs in your pocket")

^sean


In 1927 silent movies came alive with sound. In 2013, the silent photos in your camera roll will do the same.

StoryApp. Add a bit of life back to your life.

100-Year Vision
Collect your family's entire life story so your grandchild can "talk" with your grandfather as if they're in the same room.

Use it as a new way to show off your day or your work, and charge money for access to your best story. Get discovered while discovering yourself.

^sean

Day 271:  Connected Stories UI "Tree"

connected rooms in a larger dungeon.
makes sense to me.

^trag

Inspiration for connected stories "map"

The content of this post was created approximately 3 months in the past. Products: StoryApp Records Your Voice Over A Few Photos
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